You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The line diagram illustrates the number of participants in a variety of sports in five different years with five-year intervals from 1985 to 2005.
To begin
Linking Words
with, the volume of individuals taking part in rugby started at a gigantic 250 and continuously declined to a massive 200 in the year 1995. A remarkable drop
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
rugby was seen after 1995 and arrived at a minuscule 50 in the
last
Linking Words
year of record.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, tennis began at 150 in 1985 and slightly escalated to reach its peak at approximately an enormous 220 in 2005. What is interesting to note is both of them were at the same point in 1995, at 200.
Additionally
Linking Words
, the basketball players in 1985 were around a nominal 80 and minimally oscillated to 80 again
at the end
Linking Words
of the period.
Finally
Linking Words
, the badminton group was roughly 50 and unnoticeably swang to exactly a meagre 50 in 1995,
as well as
Linking Words
levelling off at
this
Linking Words
level until 2005. What is surprising to see is in 20 years, the basketball was more than the badminton by 1.5 times.
Overall
Linking Words
,
it is clear that
Linking Words
the trends of tennis and rugby are reversed and both basketball and badminton have the same trajectory.
Submitted by nnatthinee on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: