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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.
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The chart compares the amounts of
waste
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 that were produced in six countries in the years 1980, 1990 and 2000. In each of these years, the US produced more
waste
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 than Ireland, Japan,
Korea
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, Poland and Portugal combined. It is
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 noticeable that
Korea
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 was the only country that managed to reduce its
waste
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 output by the year 2000. Between 1980 and 2000,
waste
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 production in the US rose from 131 to 192
million
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tonnes
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, and rising trends were
also
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 seen in Japan, Poland and Portugal. Japan’s
waste
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 output increased from 28 to 53
million
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tonnes
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,
while
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 Poland and Portugal saw
waste
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 totals increase from 4 to 6.6 and from 2 to 5
million
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tonnes
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 respectively. The trends for Ireland and
Korea
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 were noticeably different from those described above. In Ireland,
waste
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 production increased more than eightfold, from only 0.6
million
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tonnes
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 in 1980 to 5
million
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tonnes
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 in 2000.
Korea
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,
by contrast
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, cut its
waste
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 output by 12
million
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tonnes
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 between 1990 and 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, korea, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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