The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below illustrates the future careers of Anthropology
graduates
from one university. The salaries of the anthropologists
in
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work
after five years can be seen in the table.
Overall
, over half of Anthropology
graduates
get
a full-time
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full-time work
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work
as their destination. Most of the
graduates
get well paid after five years of
work
, especially working as freelance consultants and government sector. It can be seen that full-time
work
gets 52%, after that, the proportion of part-time
work
is 15%. The third one is 12% of unemployed people.
While
the lowest percentage was only 5%, Fewer students did part-time
work
and postgrad study, most people prefer to get a full-time job after
graduate
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. In terms of Government sector, it is the highest percentage of Anthropology
graduates
income. There are 50% of employments' salary is $100,000+. The income of freelance consultants from $75,000-99,999 to $100,000+ have the same percentage at 40%.
However
, there is still a minority in freelance consultants and the government sector, they get $25,000 to 49,999.
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