The maps below display a small theatre in 2010, and the same theatre in 2012.

The maps below display a small theatre in 2010, and the same theatre in 2012. In general,

it is clear that

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the north of the plans saw significant transformations, with the most noticeable changes being the Carrider

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. In general, the dressing room was relocated to the northwest of the theatre and the showers appeared behind the dressing room. In 2012, most of the north of the map was a

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built to the north of the stage.

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the stage remained unchanged.

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, the storage

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was relocated to the east of the stage. Regarding the southern, the café

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was knocked down and

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by a new ticket

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, the old ticket

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area

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and the old admin

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demolished to make way for a new restaurant and the old admin

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was moved to the west of the map.

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