The diagrams below give information about two road tunnels in two Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given cross-sections illustrate two different tunnels for cars in two cities in Australia.

Overall

, the two tunnels were constructed under different conditions and had different dimensions.

Additionally

although

the second

tunnel

was larger and was built faster than the first

tunnel

, it was more expensive. Looking at the first

tunnel

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was constructed under a bridge with a stand to help support the structure,

this

tunnel

is 1.5 meters high, stretching 2.2

kilometers

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kilometres

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In addition

, it took 12 years to fully construct, costing $555 million and has 4 lanes. Turning focus towards the second

tunnel

this

tunnel

was built underneath a layer of stone and clay, above which is the road. In terms of size, its height is 2.5 meters,

while

its length is 3.6

kilometers

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kilometres

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This

tunnel

was built from 2002 to 2006, which is only 4 years, meanwhile, it cost $1.1 billion, allowing 6 lanes for vehicles.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

150 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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The diagrams below give information about two road tunnels in two Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

In some countries, some school leavers choose to work or travel for a year between finishing secondary school and attending university.