The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000. Write at least 150 words.
The
given
pie chart above shows how changed world Verb problem
apply
population
between 1900 and 2000. In general, Asia had the biggest proportion of both pie charts and Use synonyms
Europe’
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Europe
s
percentage decreased.
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's
Worl
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World
population
increased from 1.6 billion to 6 billion. Asia had been three-fifths in 1900. It decreased to 54 Use synonyms
percent
and Asia Pacific Use synonyms
included
in 2000. Europe with Russia’s Add a missing verb
was included
population
decreased dramatically from 25 Use synonyms
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percent
to 14 Change the spelling
per cent
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percent
. The North Change the spelling
per cent
America
had not changed in a century. It had been a very small number in 1900 and it was still a very small number in 2000. Africa Use synonyms
had
accounted for 4 Unnecessary verb
apply
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percent
of the world Change the spelling
per cent
population
in 1900. It Use synonyms
incereased
sharply and accounted for 14 Correct your spelling
increased
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percent
in 2000. In 1900, there had been only Latin Change the spelling
per cent
America
. Use synonyms
Then
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Caribbean
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the Caribbean
included
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was included
to
Latin Change preposition
in
America
in 2000. It had been 3 Use synonyms
percent
in 1900. After that, it grew more than double. Others had not changed. It continued to be 3 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
percent
until 2000. Change the spelling
per cent
Finally
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Middle
East and North Correct article usage
the Middle
America
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inclueded
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included
to
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in
pie
chart and Correct article usage
the pie
world
Add an article
the world
population
in 2000.Use synonyms
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