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telling about a good friend.do you agree or disagree

#friend
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 do not agree because
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 can grow up to do
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anything
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any thing
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 so
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 do not need
friend
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a friend
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therefore
 my friend is good or bad
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 do not care
.in
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 the future
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 will do something alone and
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 always believe
myself
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in myself
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overall
,the bar chart
show
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the
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apply
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stupid people
then
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 think it should be converted by another examiner to smarter and
responsible
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more responsible
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 on the one hand,
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 think it can
be
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change
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changed
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 with a food person because of
rainning
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raining
training
running
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coherence cohesion
Make sure your essay is well-organized, starting with a clear introduction, followed by body paragraphs, and concluding with a summary of your points.
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Try to stay on topic and address the specific question asked. In this case, focus on discussing a good friend and whether you agree or disagree with the importance of having a good friend.
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Provide specific examples and reasons to support your opinions, making your arguments more convincing and clear.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph flows logically to the next, maintaining a consistent and coherent structure throughout the essay.
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It’s great to see you expressing a clear opinion on the topic.
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Your confidence and self-belief come through strongly in your writing.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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