The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs above illustrate customers' daily necessity for
electricity
and how they utilize it at home. In general, people's daily consumption of
electricity
is nearly stagnant from time to time, in the summer. The use of energy experiences hike only around 2 PM and 11 PM, to approximately 20000 units.
In contrast
, household represents a fluctuating trend of energy intake throughout the day. The lowest
electricity
units are used in the morning around 8 am,
then
rise gradually afterwards.
Finally
, it hits a peak at almost 50000 units at 10 PM
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and drastically decreases after that hour. In terms of
electricity
utilization, it is noticeable that more than half of
overall
usage is gone into heating functions,
for example
for rooms and water heaters. The rest of the electric devices,
such
as kitchen tools, entertainment-related products, and cleaning tools, only donate around fifteen to seventeen per cent each to total
electricity
expenses.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity consumption
  • Kilowatt-hours (kWh)
  • Energy demand
  • Power grid
  • Renewable energy sources
  • Non-renewable energy sources
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Conservation efforts
  • Industrial sector
  • Residential sector
  • Commercial sector
  • Fluctuation
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Efficiency improvements
  • Seasonal variation
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