The diagram below shows a neighborhood before and after a mall was constructed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
he
pictures illustrate the changes, which have taken place in a neighbourhood before and after building a shopping Correct your spelling
The
mall
.
Overall
, a parking lot
was built in the area replacing two houses, while
a book store
and shoe store
were removed for the shopping mall
. Park and Lake were torn down to empty a
space for another parking Remove the article
apply
lot
.
The new shopping mall
has been built by removing the book store
and shoe store
, besides
that the forest to the north has been torn down to allocate more space to the new mall
.
Before building the mall
, there was a housing area along Main Street
and Oak Street
. Two of the houses in
Change preposition
on
the
Main Correct article usage
apply
Street
were demolished to construct a parking lot
to the north. However
, houses on the
Oak Correct article usage
apply
street
remained the same. Capitalize word
Street
In addition
, another parking lot
was built to replace the park and the lake, which were at
Change preposition
apply
the
far south of the Correct article usage
apply
neighborhood
.Change the spelling
neighbourhood
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