The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.

The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.
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The table illustrates the amount of money spent by consumers on three different types of stuff in various countries around the world, in the year 2002.
Overall
, it can be seen obviously that the most expense by residents in all countries was
food
category,
whereas
the lowest was leisure and education for the whole.
According to
the chart, 28.91% of consumers expensed on
food
purposes, followed by clothing and entertainment purposes, which accounted for 6.43% and 2.21%, respectively.
Then
, Italians spent money on
food
and drinks the most, constituting 16.36%, and the clothes category and educational category were ranked second and
third,
being 9% and 3.20% , in order. Afterwards, there was 18.8% of
food
/drinks/tobacco
expenditure
by Spaineses, meanwhile, there was varied in range from 1.98% to 6.51% in another two categories.
Furthermore
, citizens in Sweden consumed
food
and drinks occupied 15.77%, followed by 5.4% of clothing and footwear type and 3.22% of leisure and academic type.
Additionally
, Turkey people spent their money on
food
purposes for the most, which
also
claimed the highest
expenditure
of all, contributing 32.14%. In the meantime, there was 6.63% of
expenditure
on clothes and footwear in Turkey and 4.35% of consumer
expenditure
on leisure and academic aspects.
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