The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.

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The given line graph illustrates the rate of

coffee

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sending

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sent

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overseas from

Brazil

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Colombia

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and

Costa

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Rica

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within a

period

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of 10 years, commencing from 2002.

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Colombia

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and

Brazil

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was

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had

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the highest rate of

coffee

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export from 2002 to 2006

while

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the opposite can be observed for

Costa

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Rica

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According to

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the diagram, at the beginning of the

period

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, the amount of

coffee

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Costa

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Rica

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was 15 Kilograms and it decreased sharply until 2006 when it reached around

8Kibgrams

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8 kilograms

then

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this

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number keeps moving upward to finish

just

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at just

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under 20

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Kibgrams

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Kilograms

in 2002.

brazil

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started

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around 12

Kibgrams

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then

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during 4 years to reach 15Kibgrams ,

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this

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figures continue the fluctuation over the

period

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to finish under 25Kibgrams.

at the end

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of the

period

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Colombia

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received the same as

Costa

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Rica

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it was at the beginning of the

period

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moreover

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coffee

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export from

Brazil

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was

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more significantely

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significantely

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significant

than that

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from

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Colombia

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, brazil, colombia, costa, rica, period, kibgrams with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
7
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

155 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Line graph
Illustrates
Amount
Exported
Abroad
Capacity
Trends
Increase
Decrease
Significant
Peaks
Troughs
Reasons
Climate
Demand
Trade policies
Compare and contrast
Fluctuations
Economic conditions
Agricultural developments
Unique elements
Production scale
Market strategy
Global coffee demand
Agricultural technology
International trade agreements
Competitiveness
Quality
Reputation

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The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You want to complain about the service that you received in the hotel you stayed in while attending a recent meeting. Write a letter to the person who organized the meeting. In the letter Describe the meeting Explain the problems with the service Suggest what the meeting organizer should do.

some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?