The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The provided maps illustrate how the
park
of Grange has changed from 1920
untill
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until
today. It can be clearly seen that the whole city has experienced significant changes during the period. There used to be some seats in around
of
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the city in 1920,but they have been demolished recently.Another striking change is the conversion of
stage
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for musicians into an Amphitheatre for concerts in the west of
the
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Grange
park
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from 1920
untill
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until
now.
Moreover
,the Rose
garden
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in the
north east
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and
south west
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of the
park
have been removed and they have been turned into the cafe and empty area,respectively.
However
,the Rose garden in the
north east
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of the place
have
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remained unchanged over the period. It is interesting to note that there was a Fountain in the
center
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of the
park
,but the government has converted Fountain into
Rose
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garden which has been surrounded by Seats.Another interesting change is the transformation of the Pond for water plants into the children's play area in the
north east
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beside the cafe between 1920 to
this
moment.
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Additionally
,there used to be a Glasshouse in 1920,but It has been replaced by
water
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feature which is located in the east of the area.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pond
  • northwest corner
  • large central open area
  • residential areas
  • community-oriented space
  • playground
  • eastern border
  • parking lot
  • convenience
  • commercial zone
  • amenities
  • walking path
  • encircles
  • joggers
  • accessible
  • entrances
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