The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.
The given two pie charts demonstrate the proportion pertaining to the residents living in
Australia
and
Canada
with their marital status.
Overall
, it is apparent that the percentages of Canadians in every martial status were higher than those of Australians except for the group who married and had same-sex marriage.
Additionally
, the highest figures were for individuals who separated but did not divorce
while
the opposite was true for the rate of divorce in the two nations. Beginning with the data of people in separated but not divorced, they accounted for 53% in
Canada
and 41% in
Australia
respectively, making it the highest rates. Regarding those in the married group where
Australia
made up 46% of people, below
this
level was 29% in
Canada
. Turning to the remaining statistics, with regard to those who never married and widowed, they shared similar proportions at 7% in
Canada
and roughly 6% in
Australia
.
Similarly
, residents getting divorced,
respresented
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represented
both a mere lower than 2% in both countries. A noticeable point is the same-sex marriage group where its figure recorded only at 3% among Australians
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