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The table below gives information on customer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on customer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The given table compares the five different countries in terms of customer spending
on
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 three categories in 2002.
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,
it is clear that
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 in all countries, the largest expenditure was on food, drinks and tobacco and the
least
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last
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 one was on leisure activities and education. The highest expenditure on food and drinks was in Turkey, at 32,14%. The indicator of
Ireland
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 in
this
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 category was quite lower than it, with 28,91%. The figures for Italy,
Spain
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 and
Sweden
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 were relatively similar, at 16,36% for Italy, 18,80% for
Spain
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 and 15,77% for
Sweden
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. Turning to
category
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the category
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 of clothing and
foodwear
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footwear
, Italy had the largest proportion, which represented 9%. The figures for
Ireland
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 and
Spain
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 were almost the same as those for Turkey, at 6,5%. The lowest expenditure was experienced in
Sweden
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, at 5,40%. Regarding
sepending
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spending
depending
 on education and leisure, Turley customers spent the most money on
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 category, at 4,34%. The figures for Italy and
Sweden
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 were
slighty
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slightly
 higher than those for
Ireland
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, at 3,23% for
Sweden
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, 3,2% for Italy and 2,21% for
Ireland
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. The lowest indicator was experienced in
Spain
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, at 1,98%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ireland, spain, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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