Your English-speaking friend has asked your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say how important New Year is to people in your country • describe how New Year is celebrated in your country • explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country
Dear Michael
I hope my letter finds you well.I am writing to give you some facts about celebrating New
Year
in Uzbekistan and in other countries
First of all,In my country
New Add a comma
country,
Year
is a
important to Change the article
apply
people
.New Year
means new life and new changes.And people
like trying new things as New
Correct article usage
the New
Year
changes
Secondly
,this
holiday celebrate
with relations, friends and classmates or colleagues.Wrong verb form
is celebrated
This
day If you go out You'll see Change preposition
On this
people
wearing kind of unusual dresses.Like wrap and shirt dresses for women and smart casual, black tie for men
And if I talk a little about New Year
foods,most people
tend to make a
traditional meals and different salads.In New Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Year
mom make
traditional Olivier salad.It has a simple ingredients that you can easily make
As I know Brazilian Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
people
have a few symbols,they are
wear different clothes to Unnecessary verb
apply
a different holidays
.They celebrate New Correct the article-noun agreement
different holidays
a different holiday
Year
watch
fireworks, watching TV or going on a walk in the parks
The reason why I like celebrating New Wrong verb form
by watching
Year
in Uzbekistan is because we are together with
my family, friends and relations.We every
New Correct pronoun usage
Every
Year
dance,go out and have a great dinner.My parents don't like jokes but this
day we all joke and laugh
I hope it can be useful to your project.
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task response
The response adequately covers all the points asked in the prompt, but it could provide more details about New Year celebrations in Uzbekistan specifically, without diverting to Brazilian customs.
coherence and cohesion
Improving the logical flow between paragraphs and using more linking words or phrases would enhance coherence.
coherence and cohesion
Try to stick to one idea per paragraph to avoid confusing the reader.
task response
The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for an informal letter.
coherence and cohesion
The closing of the letter is appropriately signed off, maintaining a personal touch.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,