The table and graph below show information about cinema visit is in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables and graph below illustrate the
inormation
regarding movie Correct your spelling
information
visit
in Auckland from 1995 to 2003. Fix the agreement mistake
visits
Overall
, it can been
seen the tables Change the verb form
be
was
more Change the verb form
were
higer
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higher
attandance
than Frequency (Correct your spelling
attendance
Avarage
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Average
visit
) cinema visit
all age group. Morover
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figure
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figures
visit
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visits
according to
age group that trends flectuation.
Regarding the data Tabel, Attedance
started from 62% in1996 Correct your spelling
Attendance
then
it increased to 72% in 1998. After that
It declined Add a comma
that,
70
% in 1999. The Change preposition
by 70
next,
it has been increased 72 % in 2000. In addition
, Frequncy
Avarage Began from 10, 3 in 199, it increased to 11.1. After Correct your spelling
Frequency
that
it declined to mostly 8 between 1998 to 2000.
Cinema Add a comma
that,
visit
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visits
according to
age group, it
started Correct pronoun usage
apply
50+
at 15 in 1999, it has Change preposition
at 50+
flectuated
until at end periods at Correct your spelling
fluctuated
aproximatelly
15.5. Correct your spelling
approximately
However
, 5-35 began 10
in 1999, it had Change preposition
at 10
flectuaded
until the end periods to 10.5 in 2000. Correct your spelling
fluctuated
Then
39-49 started point about 10.5 in 1999, it flectuated
until Correct your spelling
fluctuated
at the end
to 15 in 2000.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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