You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The illustration provided below depicts three potential sites where a recreational facility could be established.

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, it seems that the right side of the image is a factory. There is a residential area in the middle of the map so

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, an expanded jungle area is located on the left side of the picture.

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, the industrial region cannot be a good place to build an entertainment

center

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. It has chemical and noise pollution,

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, it has road access and is located parallel to the river.

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the residential region has the best road availability but it is not as virginity as the jungle located in the east. Its advantage is popularity. And

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, there is a great green zone that does not have any accessibility, unfortunately. It can be the best entertainment hub because it has great potential for improvement

such

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as bicycling, building forest cottages, camping, Benji jumping, etc.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

151 words

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