You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The illustration provided below depicts three potential sites where a recreational facility could be established.

Overall

, it seems that the right side of the image is a factory. There is a residential area in the middle of the map so

finally

, an expanded jungle area is located on the left side of the picture.

Firstly

, the industrial region cannot be a good place to build an entertainment

center

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centre

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. It has chemical and noise pollution,

however

, it has road access and is located parallel to the river.

Second,

the residential region has the best road availability but it is not as virginity as the jungle located in the east. Its advantage is popularity. And

finally

, there is a great green zone that does not have any accessibility, unfortunately. It can be the best entertainment hub because it has great potential for improvement

such

as bicycling, building forest cottages, camping, Benji jumping, etc.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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5 paragraphs

151 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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