The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the percentage of household chores by different types of electrical appliances in one country within a period of 99 years, commencing from 1920
while
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other
graph shows the rate of hours Correct article usage
the other
housework
per week in one community from 1920 to 2019 , commencing from 1920.
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of housework
Overal
, the highest rate of using electrical appliances can be observed for Correct your spelling
Overall
vacume
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vacuum
cleaner
.
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cleaners
According to
the diagram, at the Linking Words
beginnig
of the year, refrigerators started with a low percentage almost Correct your spelling
beginning
arond
0% Correct your spelling
around
whilist
washing Correct your spelling
while
machine
and Fix the agreement mistake
machines
vacum
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vacuum
cleaner
were Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
significantely
greater than Correct your spelling
significantly
that
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the
frefrigerators
by 40% and 30 % respectively. Correct your spelling
refrigerators
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this
figures for using refrigerators moderately increased until 2019 to reach 100% Correct determiner usage
These
where as
washing Correct your spelling
whereas
machine
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machines
move
upward trent to finish just over 70%. in 1920 , the number of hours per week Wrong verb form
moved
for
doing Change preposition
apply
acctivites
at home was recorded at 50% for washing cloth and cleaning.Correct your spelling
activities
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moreover
, the rate of using Capitalize word
Moreover
electoronic
tools increased Correct your spelling
electronic
while
the opposite can be seen for Linking Words
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
time
per week.Fix the agreement mistake
times
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