The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015. at least 150 words.

The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015.  at least 150 words.
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table above shows children’s trouble in two primary schools between 2005 and 2015. In general
school
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a
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had more problems
both
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years and
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school
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school’s
b
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’s percentage of problems didn’t change much. Reading ability
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increased
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1
percent
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both
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school
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and
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school
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School B
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b
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between 2005 and 2015. Handwriting in
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a 28
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both in 2005 and 2015.
Handwriting
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didn’t change
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in
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b
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it stayed
7
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at 7
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percent
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. Spelling
ın
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in
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a
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decrease
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from 30
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to 25
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in 2015. In
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b
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ıt increased double. In
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school
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school,
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a
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problem of verbal expression of ideas was 35
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percent
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in 2005 but it fell to 21
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in 2015. In
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b
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it climbed only 1
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on
decade
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the decade
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. Concentration in
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decreased sharply from 40
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to 18
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in
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a. It stayed
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percentage in
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b
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in 2015. Following instructions had been 42
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when started and
the
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it reduced
24
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by 24
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percent
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in
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a
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between 2005 and 2015. It rose double
ın
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in
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the decade
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, percent, b with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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