The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015. at least 150 words.
The
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table above shows children’s trouble in two primary schools between 2005 and 2015. In general Verb problem
apply
school
Use synonyms
a
had more problems Capitalize word
A
both
years and Change preposition
in both
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Correct article usage
the school
school
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school’s
b
’s percentage of problems didn’t change much.
Reading ability Use synonyms
inreased
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increased
only
1 Change preposition
by only
percent
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both
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in both
school
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a
and Capitalize word
A
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school
Correct your spelling
School B
b
between 2005 and 2015. Handwriting in Use synonyms
school
a 28 Use synonyms
percent
both in 2005 and 2015. Use synonyms
Handwriting
didn’t change Add an article
The handwriting
also
in Linking Words
school
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b
it stayedUse synonyms
7
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at 7
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percent
. Spelling Change the spelling
per cent
ın
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in
school
Use synonyms
a
Correct article usage
apply
decrease
from 30 Wrong verb form
decreased
percent
to 25 Use synonyms
percent
in 2015. In Use synonyms
school
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b
ıt increased double.
In Use synonyms
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school
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school,
a
problem of verbal expression of ideas was 35 Correct article usage
the
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percent
in 2005 but it fell to 21 Change the spelling
per cent
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percent
in 2015. In Change the spelling
per cent
school
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b
it climbed only 1 Use synonyms
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percent
on Change the spelling
per cent
decade
. Concentration in Add an article
the decade
a decade
lesson
decreased sharply from 40 Fix the agreement mistake
lessons
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percent
to 18 Change the spelling
per cent
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percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
school
a. It stayed Use synonyms
same
percentage in Change the article
the same
school
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b
in 2015. Following instructions had been 42 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
percent
when started and Change the spelling
per cent
the
it reduced Remove the article
apply
24
Change preposition
by 24
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percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
school
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a
between 2005 and 2015. It rose double Correct article usage
apply
ın
Correct your spelling
in
school
Use synonyms
b
on Use synonyms
decade
.Add an article
the decade
a decade
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