You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar diagram compares the number of people immigrating from England to five different countries over a five-year period.
Overall
, it is evident that Australia was the most
favorite
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destination for British people,
whereas
, America and New Zealand were the least popular.
According to
the data, Australia accepted around 40.000
emigrants
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to reside in its country,
however
, the number
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in 2006 to more than 50.000. Spain stood as the second most popular destination, hosting approximately 32000 immigrants in the first three years and saw a dramatic decline in 2007. New Zealand experienced a slight
decreased
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in
following
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years, starting with 22000 passengers in 2004 and dropping to 20000 in 2007. The USA and France witnessed some fluctuations over the years, the former had the fewest emigrants in 2005,
while
the latter welcomed more than 32000 people that year.
At the end
of the period
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less than 20000 travellers picked the USA and France as their destination for living.
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  • emigration
  • migrate
  • destination
  • trend
  • notable
  • significant
  • spike
  • drop
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • stable
  • consistent
  • overview
  • summarize
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