The graph shows the use of landlines and mobile phones in 7 different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the use of landlines and mobile phones in 7 different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The chart given illustrates the
number
of mobile phones and landlines per one hundred citizens in seven different countries. From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that the quantity of
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users in Canada, the US, and the UK are higher than portable ones.
However
, other countries show a reverse result.
Additionally
, Italy has the highest
number
of mobile phones
as well as
the lowest
number
of
imobile
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mobile
immobile
ones. As can be seen from the graph, the
number
of landlines in each one hundred residents in Denmark is the highest, at nearly 90. Meanwhile, the figures for the US and Sweden are lower, at the same value, at under 70.
Moreover
, the data on Canada, Germany and the UK are
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vicinity of 60. In
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addition
to
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, the
Italian
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Italians
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use fixed lines the least with about 42. In
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of telephone statistics, the
number
of devices in Italy and Sweden are 90 and approximately 88, respectively.
Furthermore
, The figures for the UK and
Demark
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Denmark
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are around 85 and 82, in turn, compared to 70 and nearly 50 in that of Germany and the US.
Besides
that, the
Canadian
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own just under 40
smart phones
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smartphones
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in one hundred people.
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