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The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years.

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The provided bar chart illustrates the total of motion pictures created by five nations from 2007 to 2009.
Overall
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, it is clearly observed that the A country was in the top spot among other
countries
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. Meanwhile, the
countries
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 of
C
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, D, and
E
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 had the relative same amount during the entire period. On the one hand, there was an increase in
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 B,
C
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, and
E
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 between 2007 and 2009.
For example
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, in 2007 the number of B started in 50 videos and increased slightly to 51 films before it rocketed to 70 videos in 2009.
In addition
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,
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 and
E
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 had a similar style which rose gradually until the end period. As data shows the quantities of
C
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 and
E
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 both began less than 10 screenplays and ended to around 15 and 11 screenplays respectively.
On the other hand
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, there was a decrease in
countries
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 A and D during the same period.
For instance
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, the figure for A remained changed in two years at around 88 productions
then
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 it declined to roughly 80 films.
However
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, the pattern of D had a deviation trend which fluctuated 10 films in 2008.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, c, e with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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