The graph gives information about the percentage of the population of four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040.

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The line chart illustrates the proportion of residents living in cities in four different countries with eight years with ten-year intervals between 1970 and 2040.

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it is clear that

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the population in Malaysian cities is almost the highest compared to others.

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, Indonesia stays in

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place in the first half of the record and the rest belongs to Thailand.

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with, The fraction of Malaysia started at exactly 30 and surged to 45 in 1990 before rocketing up to reach its peak and ending at a gigantic 85% in 2040.

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, the Phillippines which was well over 30 in 1970 dramatically fluctuated to nearly 50% and noticeably swang again to 45% in 2020. A gradual rise is predicted after 2020 and will arrive at a massive 55% in 2040. What is interesting to note is the closest gap between Malaysia and the Phillippines was seen in 1990 by approximately 5%.

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, the trend of both Indonesia and Thailand was the same, they began at a minuscule 18% and 13%

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and increased to a meagre 30% and 25% in 1990.

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, Indonesia was predicted to soar to an enormous 60% in the

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year whilst Thailand will shoot up to 58% in 2040. What is surprising to see is both of them had the same percentage in 2000.

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The graph gives information about the percentage of the population of four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040.

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