There is a table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished and the charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how were pleased they were visit, during the same two periods.

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the numbers of

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to Ashdown Museum during the

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before and the

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after it was refurbished and the charts show the result of surveys asking

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how were pleased they

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, during the same two periods.

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before refurbishment from

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number of 74000

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of both charts which are obvious the

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before and after restoration demonstrated that no response to surveys of visitor satisfaction. In

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, 31,013

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decreased to 13,800 after the repair. The number of satisfied people increased from 22,200 before the revamp to 36,800 after it. 15

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of the total

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74,000 were very satisfied in the pre-renovation survey, and 35

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in the post-survey of 92,000 people. The figure of very dissatisfied

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declined from 10

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after the renovation.

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had the greatest impact on the number of dissatisfied and satisfied people.