There is a table showing the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished and the charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how were pleased during the same two periods.
There is a table showing the numbers of
visitors
to Ashdown Museum during the year
before and the year
after it was refurbished and the charts show the result of surveys asking visitors
how were pleased during the same two periods.
A year
before refurbishment from total
number of 74000 Change the article
a total
the total
due to
the chart the high figure of visitors
ended up dissatisfied while
after a renovation this
result changed to satisfied. The lowest percentage of both charts which are obvious the year
before and after restoration demonstrated that no response to surveys of visitor satisfaction.
In detail, 31,013 visitors
were unsatisfied before refurbishment but these figures decreased to 13,800 after the repair. The number of satisfied people increased from 22,200 before the revamp to 36,800 after it. 15 per cent of the total of 74,000 were very satisfied in the pre-renovation survey, and 35 per cent in the post-survey of 92,000 people. The figure of very dissatisfied visitors
declined from 10 percent according to
the first chart to 5 percent after the renovation.
To conclude
, the refurbishment of Ashdown museum
had the greatest impact on the number of dissatisfied and satisfied people.Capitalize word
Museum
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