The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countriesin 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countriesin 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts show the percentage of power supply
produces
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produced
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in four different countries,in the year 2003.
Overall
, except
India
, almost every country listed makes energy
it
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apply
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from hydro structures,
whereas
India
manufactures from the fossil sphere.
However
, Sweden used nuclear supply more than any other country, as some countries didn't use it at all.
While
observing the given statistics deeply , Morocco used 95% of the
resourxes
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resources
generated from the water flow, leaving the fossil fuel behind. Curiously , Vietnam almost divided its electricity industrialisation between fossil sphere and hydro stations , where hydropower overweights in
generating
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the generating
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process. Some countries like Sweden and
India
used each source of manufacturing mechanisms.
For instance
, Sweden uses 52% of hydropower, 44% of nuclear energy and only 4% of fossil fuel .
Whereas
,
India
uses mostly fossil sources for 82% of energy produced, 14% of hydro generation and only 4% from the nuclear zone .
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words india with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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