The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the percentage of British unemployed allocated their time during the previous year.
According to
the data, it is evident that Linking Words
housework
, shopping and Use synonyms
job
hunting are the most common Use synonyms
activities
for Use synonyms
women
and Use synonyms
men
, Use synonyms
while
drinking and playing Linking Words
sport
represented the lowest number of Fix the agreement mistake
sports
women
and Use synonyms
men
.
In the morning, Use synonyms
housework
accounted for the highest Use synonyms
activities
for Use synonyms
women
, at 48%, Use synonyms
while
22% of Linking Words
men
commonly searched for Use synonyms
Use synonyms
job
. Shopping was the second highest of time spending for Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
women
and Use synonyms
men
, both at 26% and 20% respectively. Only Use synonyms
few
Change the article
a few
women
and Use synonyms
men
participated in drinking and playing Use synonyms
sport
. ranging between 1 and 4%, similar Fix the agreement mistake
sports
with
in the afternoon.
In the afternoon, the majority of Change preposition
to
women
Use synonyms
also
did Linking Words
a
Remove the article
apply
housework
, with a relatively high at 21%, nearly the same level as Use synonyms
men
doing Use synonyms
housework
in the morning. 17% of Use synonyms
women
both Use synonyms
did
shopping, and Verb problem
went
visiting
Wrong verb form
visited
friend
and relatives. Fix the agreement mistake
friends
Conversely
, watching TV accounted for the majority of Linking Words
Use synonyms
men
Change noun form
men's
activities
, at 14%. Use synonyms
This
was followed closely by gardening, at 13%, Linking Words
while
Linking Words
men
spent their time Use synonyms
on
visiting Change preposition
apply
friend
and relatives, and Fix the agreement mistake
friends
job
hunting, both at 12%.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
this
data indicates the Linking Words
difference
Replace the word
different
activities
between Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
. most Use synonyms
women
are responsible for Use synonyms
housework
and shopping, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
men
Use synonyms
searched
for Wrong verb form
search
Use synonyms
job
.Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words housework, job, activities, women, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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