Some people think that the remain purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extend to do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, the primary target in education of schools

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their

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good

person

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people

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or employees that help the social better and better, rather than they can

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individualized advantage. Of course,

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totally concur

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first statement because in order to be excellent people not hard, yet not everyone can do it. Most aims of

school

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schools

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help their

students

become

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good people.

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present

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time, the awareness of

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undergraduates

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will receive a lot of respect from everyone because they always have

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to protect

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of protecting

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environment

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the environment

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of

school

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the school

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.

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, the aware

students

will pick up

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from

school

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the school

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yard or other sites into rubbish

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to make the

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educated

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environment fresher and fresher.

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,

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morals

also

get

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admiration

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and help from teachers.

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, when you get some hard homework, you will

recieve

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receive

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introduction

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this

homework from your teachers.

Additionally

, schools will do anything that can make their

students

to be a benefit person for

country

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.

On the other hand

, the

school

can not exist long-term to train their student to

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citizens and workers.

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because

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they should teach and help them find

job

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a

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career or some skills of our lifestyles. We can

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see that in Vietnam, the

gorvernment

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government

usually

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to main subjects than social subjects

such

as Math, English or Chemistry.

However

, nowadays, we hardly find suited jobs or which we want to do,

whereas

in social, there are a lot of jobs with various majority. So, academies ought to assist in finding the talents of

students

and it can improve

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the quality

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social

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In conclusion, the academies must train their pupils to

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have become

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a

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good

person

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people

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and help them reach suited jobs that

depending

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on their talents.

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, the education of schools should

spent

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equally

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time on everything and it will benefit our communities.