The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the volume of imported
tea
and coffee
in four different countries. The unit in the Y-axis is shown in tonnes.
Overall
, it is clear that
tea
is popular in Great Britain and their citizens tend not to drink coffee
. On the other hand
, coffee
is mostly interesting to Germany
people.
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German
To begin
with, the amount of tea
in the UK was a gigantic 80,000 followed by Germany
represented well over 40,000. Both Canada and America had almost the same number, which accounted for a minuscule 20,000. What is interesting to note is the total of imported tea
in the UK was more than the final places, Canada and the USA, by approximately 4 times.
Additionally
, The importation of coffee
in Germany
occupied an enormous 50,000; besides
, an unnoticeable gap of
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in
coffee
was seen between Canada and the United States of America by a meagre 2,000. Finally
, the United Kingdom came in last
place with a nominal 30,000. What is surprising to see is the UK was less than Germany
around 1.67 times.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, germany with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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