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The bar chart shows the percentage pf people who ate five prtions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008

The bar chart shows the percentage pf people who ate five prtions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008
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Contained in the chart is data pertaining to the proportion of individuals who consumed daily different portions of vegetables and fruits in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
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, the percentage of residents in all patterns experienced an increase over the 7-year period.
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, it is obvious that the figure for women
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who consumes
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consumes
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consume
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these food
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 was always higher than others over the whole timeframe. In 2001, there was about 22% of females consumed fruits and vegetables per day, which
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 increased significantly to nearly 35% in 2006, which was the highest in
this
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 chart. After 2 years,
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 figure fell marginally by 5%;
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,
this
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 pattern was always responsible for the highest number in
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 diagram. Turning to the remaining statistics,
with
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apply
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around 17% of males
who
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apply
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ate five portions of vegetables and fruits, followed by 11% of children tended to eat these foods. Over the next 5-year period, both figures mentioned above underwent
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increased
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, which rose by 8% for the former and by 12% for the latter. Interestingly, the figure for male individuals decreased slightly in the next two years, the opposite trend was true for children’s proportion.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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