(VMN)When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a statement that when it comes to two choices, whether working or not working in most of the living

time

, the latter is commonly inclined towards. From the writer’s

prospective

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,

this

decision can be

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,

due to

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more leisure

time

to enjoy their hobbies or improve themselves after a hard-working and tiring phase of working

time

. The primary point is that people who opt for that choice may have suffered from

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sufficient stress in the workplace. From dealing with an enormous amount of documents and the group’s project to facing

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a variety of problems in the corporations and their daily basis, feeling overwhelmed and exhausted when thinking about the work is inevitable. Owing to

this

, human usually wants to

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the

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current jobs, or even quit

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, to have more

time

for releasing stress.

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, as no working means no living earning, people cannot realize

this

“dream”, but just wish for it.

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results in

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big

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amount of answers choosing no work

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the beginning of the essay. The need to enhance their skills can be considered as another point worth referring

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Spending most of

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life arriving and leaving the office building, the

time

to nurture their knowledge and experience might be inadequate, though it is true to contend that more practical lessons can be learnt from the workplace. Because of

this

reason, more individuals, especially the young and ambitious ones,

wants

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to quit

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occupation

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to freely attend classes to develop plenty of soft and hard skills.

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can be basically observed from the increase of the “gap year” decision, when people at least

spends

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their free year to continue

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their vision and significantly improve numerous skills in some particular aspects. Taking all points into account,

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working gives a strain and a

time

restriction, which prevent individuals from having

time

for easing stress

as well as

developing themselves.

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,

therefore

, leads to a majority of

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gravitates

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towards the option of having no work in their most life.

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, the writer approves

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the statement.