The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
The given table compares the percentage of national consumer spending in 2002 on diverse things in five major countries.
Overall
, individuals spent more money
on food, drinks, and tobacco in all countries than other
expenses. The expenditure Change preposition
on other
of
these items was higher in Ireland and Turkey, Change preposition
on
whereas
leisure time activities and education was
paid lower in Spain and Ireland over other countries.
As the table reveals data on Irish Change the verb form
were
people
spending, there Change noun form
people's
were
Change the verb form
was
highest
proportion Change the article
the highest
on
Change preposition
of
foods
and smoking ,at 28.91%. Fix the agreement mistake
food
Nevertheless
, the proportions were lower for free time practices
and studying ,at 2.21%. Fix the agreement mistake
practice
Regarding
Italy, Change preposition
In
which
citizens spent their own pile of Correct pronoun usage
apply
money
for
clothes ,at 9.00% ,Change preposition
on
while
the lowest percentage was in
spending bills for leisure and education , at 3.20%. The figures for Spanish people spent Change preposition
on
money
for
consumption and clothing, and they are only 18.80% and 6.51%, respectively. Change preposition
on
By contrast
, in Sweden, foods and tobacco was
paid 15.77% compared with 3.22% Correct subject-verb agreement
were
money
Change preposition
of money
was
spent Unnecessary verb
apply
for
free time Change preposition
on
doings
and studying. In terms of Turkish individuals, 32.4% Correct your spelling
doing
money
were
Change the verb form
was
spared
on food, beverages, and smoking, Verb problem
spent
while
people spent money
for
clothing and shoes Change preposition
on
lower
than other items in 2002.Correct word choice
less
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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