The diagram below shows how electricity is generated at a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the cycle of
electricity
production in a hydroelectric power
station, detailing both the day and night processes.
Overall
, there are three stages in the process, commencing with the collection of water
in the river and culminating with the harnessing of electricity
at the power
plant. Through a generator, electricity
would be produced and come into use.
Looking closer at the diagram, it can be seen that water
in the river flows into the dam, which operates differently between day and night. During the day, it is noticeable that the intake of water
in the dam runs to the power
station, which is responsible for generating electricity
through the operation of the renewable turbines pumping water
to the generator. This
machine makes electricity
be
harnessed and transmitted to the Unnecessary verb
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power
lines that are ready to serve households, schools, hospitals, and factories.
In contrast
, during the night, the reversible turbines work to pump water
back from low-level reservoirs to high-level reservoirs.Submitted by hongmien.n on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, power, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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