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The table below gives information on consumers spending on different items in 5 different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumers spending on different items in 5 different countries in 2002.
The given table illustrates the percentage of national
consumer
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 expenditure, which was divided into three categories in five different nations in 2002.
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,
according to
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 given table the highest percentages in five countries belong to food and drinks
category
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.
In contrast
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, leisure and education
category
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 showed the lowest indicators for all nations. In food and drinks
category
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 Turkish people’s
consumer
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 spending was highest proportional, at 32,14% in given year. Meanwhile, expenditure in Sweden was lowest with 15,77%. Ireland, Italy and Spain had almost similar result, which 28,91%, 16,36% and 18,80%, respectively. In terms of clothing and footwear Italy showed the highest proportional 9,00%, compare the lowest
consumer
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 spending was in Sweden at 5,40%.
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, in the same
category
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 Turkey spent 6,63%, Spain 6,51%, Ireland 6,43%. In the
last
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category
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 leisure and education, which
consumer
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 spending had the lowest index, Turkish people’s percentage was higher
then
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 other at 4,35%.
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, people in Spain expended only 1,98%. People in Sweden and Italy had similar spending, which was 3,22% and 3,20%, in turn. So Irishman’s spending was 2,21%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumer, category with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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