The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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number

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of visitors travelling to one Caribbean island over 8 years from 2010 to 2017 based on the place where they are staying. At

a

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apply

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first glance, it is noticeable that the total

visitors

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number of visitors

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were showing

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showed

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an upward tendency

through out

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throughout

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the period

similarly

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the

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to the

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trend that was shown by

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number

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a number

the number

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of visitors staying on cruise ships and

island

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islands

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. In regards to cruise ships, it began at a million and moderately rose by 0.5

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millions

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million

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. From

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point onwards, before reaching a peak at 3.5

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millions

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million

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in its final

year

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, it started to skyrocket to below 3

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millions

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in 2016.

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, guests who stayed on

isle

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an isle

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in the first

year

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was

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below the original

number

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of ships

stay

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staying

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, approximately

at

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0.75

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millions

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million

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.

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number

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remained stable until the following

year

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.

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, it witnessed a moderate rise and levelled out at 1.5

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millions

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million

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for 3 years. Even though there was a fair drop in 2016, it successfully recovered in the final

year

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. Regarding the whole quantities of tourists at the beginning, it started

around

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at around

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0.25

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millions

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million

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and fluctuated between 0.25 and 0.5

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millions

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million

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until 2013 before starting to climb and peaking at around 2

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millions

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million

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