The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the
number
of visitors travelling to one Caribbean island over 8 years from 2010 to 2017 based on the place where they are staying.
At a
first glance, it is noticeable that the total Correct article usage
apply
visitors
Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
were showing
an upward tendency Wrong verb form
showed
through out
the period Correct your spelling
throughout
similarly
the
trend that was shown by Change preposition
to the
number
of visitors staying on cruise ships and Change the article
a number
the number
island
.
In regards to cruise ships, it began at a million and moderately rose by 0.5 Fix the agreement mistake
islands
millions
. From Change to singular
million
this
point onwards, before reaching a peak at 3.5 millions
in its final Change to singular
million
year
, it started to skyrocket to below 3 millions
in 2016. Change to singular
million
On the other hand
, guests who stayed on isle
in the first Add an article
an isle
the isle
year
was
below the original Correct subject-verb agreement
were
number
of ships stay
, approximately Wrong verb form
staying
at
0.75 Change preposition
apply
millions
. Change to singular
million
This
number
remained stable until the following year
. Subsequently
, it witnessed a moderate rise and levelled out at 1.5 millions
for 3 years. Even though there was a fair drop in 2016, it successfully recovered in the final Change to singular
million
year
.
Regarding the whole quantities of tourists at the beginning, it started around
0.25 Change preposition
at around
millions
and fluctuated between 0.25 and 0.5 Change to singular
million
millions
until 2013 before starting to climb and peaking at around 2 Change to singular
million
millions
.Change to singular
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, millions, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.
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