The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the
number
of visitors travelling to one Caribbean island over 8 years from 2010 to 2017 based on the place where they are staying. At
a
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first glance, it is noticeable that the total
visitors
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number of visitors
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were showing
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showed
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an upward tendency
through out
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throughout
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the period
similarly
the
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trend that was shown by
number
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a number
the number
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of visitors staying on cruise ships and
island
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islands
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. In regards to cruise ships, it began at a million and moderately rose by 0.5
millions
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million
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. From
this
point onwards, before reaching a peak at 3.5
millions
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million
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in its final
year
, it started to skyrocket to below 3
millions
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million
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in 2016.
On the other hand
, guests who stayed on
isle
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an isle
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in the first
year
was
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below the original
number
of ships
stay
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staying
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, approximately
at
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0.75
millions
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million
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.
This
number
remained stable until the following
year
.
Subsequently
, it witnessed a moderate rise and levelled out at 1.5
millions
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million
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for 3 years. Even though there was a fair drop in 2016, it successfully recovered in the final
year
. Regarding the whole quantities of tourists at the beginning, it started
around
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at around
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0.25
millions
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million
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and fluctuated between 0.25 and 0.5
millions
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million
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until 2013 before starting to climb and peaking at around 2
millions
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million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, millions, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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