The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph compares the amount of imported
tea
and
coffee
by four
countries
, namely
Canada
, The US, The United Kingdom and Germany. (in Tonnes) As can be seen, The UK accounts for the highest number of imported
tea
amongst the
countries
, with 80000 tonnes.
However
,
this
country takes up the lowest import of
tea
in comparison with the other three
countries
. Turning to
Canada
and the US, the figures recorded for imported
tea
were almost the same (20000 and just above 20000 respectively).
Additionally
, the imported rate for
coffee
in these two
countries
was well under 40000 (
Canada
) and 40000 (The US). Germany is the other country we
witnesses
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the amount of two drinks imported to. Amongst the US and
Canada
, Germany enjoys more of drinking
tea
and
coffee
(well above 40000 and 50000 tonnes respectively);
while
,
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the proportion of imported
tea
is by far the lowest compared with The United Kingdom.
Overall
, as mentioned before, people living in the UK tend to drink more
tea
amongst
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the other three
countries
;
whereas
,
coffee
drinkers account for the lowest amount compared to the rest of the
countries
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, countries, canada with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • import/export
  • commodity
  • metric tons
  • comparative
  • trend
  • data
  • statistics
  • significant
  • notable
  • figure
  • country-specific
  • bulk
  • graph/chart
  • depict
  • illustrate
  • fluctuate
  • dominant
  • minor
  • contrast
  • analyze
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