The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph compares the amount of imported
tea
and coffee
by four countries
, namely Canada
, The US, The United Kingdom and Germany. (in Tonnes)
As can be seen, The UK accounts for the highest number of imported tea
amongst the countries
, with 80000 tonnes. However
, this
country takes up the lowest import of tea
in comparison with the other three countries
. Turning to Canada
and the US, the figures recorded for imported tea
were almost the same (20000 and just above 20000 respectively). Additionally
, the imported rate for coffee
in these two countries
was well under 40000 (Canada
) and 40000 (The US).
Germany is the other country we witnesses
the amount of two drinks imported to. Amongst the US and Change the verb form
witness
Canada
, Germany enjoys more of drinking tea
and coffee
(well above 40000 and 50000 tonnes respectively); while
,
the proportion of imported Remove the comma
apply
tea
is by far the lowest compared with The United Kingdom.
Overall
, as mentioned before, people living in the UK tend to drink more tea
amongst
the other three Change preposition
than
countries
; whereas
, coffee
drinkers account for the lowest amount compared to the rest of the countries
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, countries, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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