The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given graph compares the amount of imported

tea

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and

coffee

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by four

countries

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, namely

Canada

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, The US, The United Kingdom and Germany. (in Tonnes) As can be seen, The UK accounts for the highest number of imported

tea

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amongst the

countries

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, with 80000 tonnes.

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this

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country takes up the lowest import of

tea

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in comparison with the other three

countries

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. Turning to

Canada

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and the US, the figures recorded for imported

tea

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were almost the same (20000 and just above 20000 respectively).

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, the imported rate for

coffee

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in these two

countries

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was well under 40000 (

Canada

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) and 40000 (The US). Germany is the other country we

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the amount of two drinks imported to. Amongst the US and

Canada

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, Germany enjoys more of drinking

tea

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and

coffee

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(well above 40000 and 50000 tonnes respectively);

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the proportion of imported

tea

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is by far the lowest compared with The United Kingdom.

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, as mentioned before, people living in the UK tend to drink more

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amongst

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the other three

countries

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;

whereas

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coffee

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drinkers account for the lowest amount compared to the rest of the

countries

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, countries, canada with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

187 words

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