The table below presents the food consumption per person weekly in a European country in 1992, 2002 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the amount of food consumed by individuals per week in a European country in 1992, 2002 and 2012.
Overall
, individuals consumed vegetables
the most, followed by meat
in all three periods. Although
the consumption
of meat
showed a declining tendency, their consumption
generally rose by different degrees.
Starting with the graph for vegetables
and meat
, their consumption
was much higher than that of the other three. One of the major features is that people ate vegetables
almost twice as much as meat
; their consumption
of the former ranged from 2140 to 2220 whereas
that of meat
altered from 1132 to 1211. Another striking feature of the graph is their different consumption
pattern. While
there was a gradual increase in the consumption
of vegetables
from 1992 to 2012, meat
experienced a slight decline from 1211 in 2002 to 1132 in 2012 regardless of its minor rise from 1992 to 2002.
Turning to the table for wheat, beans and cheese, wheat seems to be the most dominant of the three as its consumption
shifted from 837 in 1992 to 997 in 2012. In spite of the fact that people ate beans only about half of wheat with approximately 550 grams, they both showed a constant growth for the examined time. Finally
, the consumption
of cheese remained the lowest since it only stayed just above 100. Furthermore
, its consumption
remained unchanged from 2002 to 2012 with 125 in contrast
to a small increase from 1992 to 2002.Submitted by mizuho on
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