Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligent than human beings. While some see this as a positive development others worry about the negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is a contentious issue whether people say that the next generation of technology will surpass human beings’ intellect, which is a generally great signal for promising improvement, or whether opponents argue that it will lead to a catastrophe for humans.

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essay will assert both views and give personal opinion

at the end

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tomorrow could be seriously risky because of the

computers

’ self-thinking ability.

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users often associate smart stuff with the potential

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of the future, artificial intelligence could use that belief to take over

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society, resulting in

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unexpected havoc.

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, the first robot with a self-deciding system, Sophia, used to say that humans

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be her slaves in the next few years, and we have much evidence to prove that it could be true.

On the other hand

,

computers

with their outstanding information-providing efficiency may destroy

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critical thinking

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and other soft skills. It is true that if technological devices can supply

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treasure trove of knowledge, the education of adolescents will not be valuable anymore, leading to

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serious crisis of

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humans’ problem-solving and knowledge-gaining skills. A simple example is the data of the economy in a nation which is under

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of

computers

. If they are intelligent enough, it would be a drawback to believe all the unofficial information which those

computers

supply,

thus

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harming an entire organisation.

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Internet users. The sense of the robots

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strongly sharp, which can allow humans to make

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decisions for a range of situations, facilitating to

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efficiency.

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the former paragraph, it would be dangerous if they took advantage of that weakness and dominated human beings. In conclusion,

while

people argue that the intellect of

computers

could improve the descendants’ working performance, opponents of

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assertion point

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could cause havoc and mislead human beings’ minds. I support the latter opinion.