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The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied.

The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied.
#bar #hours #students #five #universities
Contained in the bar chart is data relating to how
much
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hours
that
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students studied in five different colleges. Units are measured in
hours
. From my observational perspective, it can be seen that students spent all
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their times
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times
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time
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 studying on weekdays rather than
weekends
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at weekends
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.
In addition
, another salient point is that
university
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universities
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 D and E had notable
different
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 in study between weekdays and weekends. Looking at the figures in
further
 detail, it can be observed that the average of
times
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time
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 studying in
university
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universities
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 B, C and E of students on weekdays
about
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 0,1: 10,6; and 10
hours
, respectively.
Additionally
,
university
 D was the lowest
times
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time
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 to learn approximately 9,6
hours
 per day. The second-lowest average of 9,8
hours
 from
university
 A. Moving on to the remaining statistics,
university
 A had the highest average of 9
hours
 per day
while
university
 D had the smallest
the
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average number of
hours
 around 5,6
hours
 on weekends.

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