You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip.Write to the travel agency.In your letter: Say where/when you went on holiday Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday Tell them what you would like them to do

Dear mom /sir I am writing
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you that
i
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I
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got
bad
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a bad
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experience when
i
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I
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holyday
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holiday
two days ago. on
sunday
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Sunday
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when
i
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I
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have
vocation
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a vocation
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with my family
i
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I
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found facilities
of
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for
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you travel
wich
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which
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is
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apply
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we have made
deal
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a deal
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with our rule travel
such
as
good
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bad room,a
tranfortation
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transportation
and
good
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car , but it is not the real of
this
promised
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unsuitable with what we have done until my wife was
angree
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agree
angry
to me.The
guider
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guide
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cannot give us a good way to find some beautiful
place
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places
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. I found many of
rooms
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the rooms
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was
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broken,and
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the car
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car
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cars
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is
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were
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bad and
tourism
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the tourism
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palces
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places
is
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are
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not
incomvenience
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convenient
.
This
was
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a terriable
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terriable
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terrible
day that
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I
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have found
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before.
Also
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our hotel is
to
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too
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far from my beach and
i
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I
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was
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very
verry
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very
tired
for
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of
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walking The
last
i
woud
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would
say to you
that
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is that
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you should repair
of
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apply
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your management from your
employee
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employees
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,and your facilities in order many people
fell
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feel
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diapointed
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disappointed
about it.
i
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hope you can realize
those
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.
Then
you should
cahange
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change
it from my money and my hotel for
this
. I look forward to hearing from you soon
your
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yours
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sincerely
abi
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task achievement
Pay close attention to spelling, grammar, and punctuation, as there are several errors that impact clarity and readability.
coherence cohesion
Better organize your paragraphs by ensuring each one handles a single, clear idea or point.
coherence cohesion
Improve transitions between ideas and paragraphs to enhance the logical flow of your letter.
task achievement
You have clearly mentioned the issues you faced on your holiday with specific examples.
coherence cohesion
Your letter has a clear greeting and closing, which makes it more polite and formal.
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