You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip.Write to the travel agency.In your letter: Say where/when you went on holiday Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday Tell them what you would like them to do

Dear mom /sir I am writing

this

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letter with regard to

inform

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you that

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got

bad

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a bad

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experience when

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holyday

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holiday

two days ago. on

sunday

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Sunday

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when

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have

vocation

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with my family

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found facilities

of

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for

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you travel

wich

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which

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is

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apply

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we have made

deal

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with our rule travel

such

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as

good

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bad room,a

tranfortation

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transportation

and

good

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car , but it is not the real of

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promised

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unsuitable with what we have done until my wife was

angree

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agree

angry

to me.The

guider

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guide

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cannot give us a good way to find some beautiful

place

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places

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. I found many of

rooms

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the rooms

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was

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broken,and

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the car

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car

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cars

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is

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were

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bad and

tourism

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the tourism

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palces

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places

is

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are

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not

incomvenience

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convenient

.

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was

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a terriable

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terriable

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terrible

day that

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have found

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had had

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before.

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Also

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our hotel is

to

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too

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far from my beach and

i

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I

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was

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very

verry

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very

tired

for

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of

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walking The

last

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i

woud

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would

say to you

that

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is that

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you should repair

of

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apply

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your management from your

employee

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employees

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,and your facilities in order many people

fell

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feel

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diapointed

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disappointed

about it.

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hope you can realize

those

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that

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.

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you should

cahange

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change

it from my money and my hotel for

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. I look forward to hearing from you soon

your

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yours

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sincerely

abi

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