The chart below gives information on the number of workers in different occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 to 2012.

The chart below gives information on the number of workers in different occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 to 2012.
The given bar chart illustrates the data of Australian workers who migrated in various careers from 2009 to 2012. Units are measured in thousands of workers.
Overall
,
it is clear that
computer programmers had the least skilled labourers entering Australia,
while
the opposite was accountants.
Additionally
, the
last
year was the second smallest except for programmers of computers. Looking at the figures in
further
detail, the most common skilled migrants to Australia were accountants in the stage 2010, nearly a third
while
the number in the three remaining years was around 21 in 2012 and under 1 thousand in the first year. Regarding
programmer
Replace the word
programming
show examples
group related to computers had the lowest total with only 20,000 in both 2009 and 2011,
whereas
4 and 5 thousand workers were the number in 2010 and 2012, respectively. Turning to the remaining statistics, it is evident that the figures for software engineer and cook were small different. The data for engineers rose 1 each time from 19 to 21 in 2011, except for a sharp decrease at 17 in the final period. There was a fluctuation for cooks between 15 and 18 over a period.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration patterns
  • Occupation categories
  • Significant growth
  • Labor shortages
  • Booming industries
  • Visa regulations
  • Job market saturation
  • Economic downturns
  • Skill shortages
  • Economic contribution
  • Infrastructure pressure
  • Technological advancements
  • Global economic predictions
  • Policy changes
What to do next:
Look at other essays: