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the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australia cities.

the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australia cities.
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The Barchart data on the number of
people
 drinking and selling coffees and tees in
Sydney
,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
 and
Hobart
.
Overall
,
while
 the
people
 who preferred going to a café for
coffee
 or tea
was
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were
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 at a high level, buying fresh
coffee
 was at the lowest level
every
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in every
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 city. Starting with the diagram of individuals who drank
coffee
 and tea in a café in the
last
 4 weeks, considered it as the highest result. In
Sydney
, it reached approximately 62 per
cent
. In
Brisbane
, it's a little bit higher than 55 per
cent
, which we cannot say about
Adelaide
, where
this
 result is almost fifty. Regarding
Melbourne
 and
Hobart
, their results are the same, it's about 64 per
cent
. Regarding
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percentage of
people
 who bought instant
coffee
 in the
last
 4 weeks, in
Sydney
this
 rate is a little bit more than 45, in
Melbourne
 it's nearly 48 per
cent
, in
Adelaide
,
this
 number reached exactly fifty. In
Hobart
, it's almost 55 per
cent
, and
finally
, in
Brisbane
, it's a little bit lower. Ending with the
people
 who bought fresh
coffee
. The lowest percentage is in
Brisbane
, where only about thirty 4 per
cent
, in
Adelaide
 it is almost 35, in
Hobart
, it achieved 38 per
cent
, in
Sydney
 and in
Melbourne
 almost the same, approximately 43 per
cent
.
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