the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australia cities.
The Barchart data on the number of percentage of
people
drinking and selling coffees and tees in Sydney
, Melbourne
, Brisbane
, Adelaide
and Hobart
.
Overall
, while
the people
who preferred going to a café for coffee
or tea was
at a high level, buying fresh Correct subject-verb agreement
were
coffee
was at the lowest level every
city.
Starting with the diagram of individuals who drank Change preposition
in every
coffee
and tea in a café in the last
4 weeks, considered it as the highest result. In Sydney
, it reached approximately 62 per cent
. In Brisbane
, it's a little bit higher than 55 per cent
, which we cannot say about Adelaide
, where this
result is almost fifty. Regarding Melbourne
and Hobart
, their results are the same, it's about 64 per cent
. RegardingAdd an article
the
people
who bought instant coffee
in the last
4 weeks, in Sydney
this
rate is a little bit more than 45, in Melbourne
it's nearly 48 per cent
, in Adelaide
, this
number reached exactly fifty. In Hobart
, it's almost 55 per cent
, and finally
, in Brisbane
, it's a little bit lower. Ending with the people
who bought fresh coffee
. The lowest percentage is in Brisbane
, where only about thirty 4 per cent
, in Adelaide
it is almost 35, in Hobart
, it achieved 38 per cent
, in Sydney
and in Melbourne
almost the same, approximately 43 per cent
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