The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the Monarch butterfly's life
cycle
.
Overall
, it is clear that
cycle
contains Correct article usage
the cycle
of
four stages which Remove the preposition
apply
begins
with mating and laying Correct subject-verb agreement
begin
egg
which is called the egg stage and ends with migration to Correct article usage
an egg
south
part which is known as the adult phase. Add an article
the south
This
is the cycle
which continues again and again.
Firstly
, insect
migrates to Correct article usage
the insect
north
where it mates and lays an egg on the weed, Add an article
the north
then
after being on the milkweed for two weeks it turns into newly
hatched larva. Correct article usage
a newly
Hence
the larva stage starts: it becomes there as a caterpillar, then
it attaches into a larva. In addition
, after 10 days it is chrysalises.
Secondly
, at the pupal stage
it is Add a comma
stage,
emeregencies
as aCorrect your spelling
emergencies
emergence
6 month
adult and moves to the south side. Add a hyphen
6-month
Then
cycle
begins again and ends the same.Add an article
the cycle
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