The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The initial pie chart illustrates the amount of power which is consumed by Australian families. The other pie chart shows the percentage of the
gas
which is emitted by using these energies.
Overall
, it is evident that water heating consumes and emits the highest proportion,
while
cooling occupies the lowest in both areas.
According to
the data, the largest percentage of energy is consumed for heating in Australia both for heating and water heating, 42 per
cent
and 30 per
cent
, respectively. The other appliances use only 15 % of the whole generated energy,
whereas
, the other 13 % of produced power is used by refrigerators, lighting and cooling. Turning to the second pie chart, the device that heats the water produces 32 % greenhouse
gas
which is the highest among the others.Interestingly other house devices emit more than one-fourth of the whole emissions. Approximately thirty per
cent
of greenhouse
gas
comes from heating systems and refrigeration. The
gas
emission from cooling systems and lighting has the lowest proportion, around ten per
cent
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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