You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to inquire about accommodation situations in a college hall of residence, as my application was accepted by a UK college for the upcoming year.
Firstly
, it would be great if you provided me with a single room. Moreover
, I do not mind sharing a bathroom. Also
, I prefer to cook sometimes. It would be great if you could provide me with some essential utilities as well.
In addition
to this
, I also
want to inform you that I am a vegetarian. Due to
that, can you please let me know if Drom Catering Services will be able to give me a few vegetarian food options? You should also
consider that I am also
allergic to nuts and eggplants.
I hope all this
information will help you find the proper dormitory for me. However
, if you are not able to find me the room, can you also
let me know about a replacement option that I can consider?
I am looking forward to your prompt answer.
Yours faithfully
Ali ASubmitted by namitabhoj1610 on
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task achievement
Your letter has covered all the main points in the task, but you could add a little more detail about your accommodation requirements, such as the location of the hall or specific amenities you might prefer.
coherence cohesion
Try to ensure that each paragraph explores a single idea in greater depth. For instance, you might separate the request about food needs and the allergy information for more clarity.
coherence cohesion
You've appropriately structured your letter with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is polite, formal, and suitable for a letter to a college administration.
task achievement
Your letter effectively addresses all parts of the prompt with specific questions and details about your needs.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite