The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given maps illustrate plans to change Grange Park in Arnold Avenue since 1920.
Overall
, over the period, both maps have maintained a distinct Rose
garden
and Entrance despite the extensive construction of different facilities, like a Children's play area, cafe, and Amphitheatre for concerts.unfortunately, those have been built with affecting the natural resources to a great extent. First of all, the stage for musicians was destroyed and built Amphitheatre for concerts. To the northeast of the site, the rose
garden
was converted into a small cafe. The next noticeable feature is that the Fountain was demolished and built rose
garden
in
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the centre of Grange Park.
Furthermore
, Glasshouse was
knocked-down
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and constructed water features. Most of the place for sitting was relocated in the
center
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of Grange Park around
rose
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the rose
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garden
with the aim of enjoying People from the view of the
garden
.
moreover
, the pond for water plants
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is coverted
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coverted
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converted
covered
in to
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Children's play area.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words garden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pond
  • northwest corner
  • large central open area
  • residential areas
  • community-oriented space
  • playground
  • eastern border
  • parking lot
  • convenience
  • commercial zone
  • amenities
  • walking path
  • encircles
  • joggers
  • accessible
  • entrances
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