Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that

arts

education is as significant as the

study

of other subjects, especially for primary

students

. I completely agree with

this

viewpoint because some educational content could be better illustrated in the

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of

arts

, and the

study

of

arts

is one key consideration

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fosters

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growth of young

students

. The

arts

could deliver information to

students

, especially to those attending primary schools, in a way that words in textbooks sometimes cannot.

Children

may become bored and tired if they have to read or listen to too much educational content in textbooks. A

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painting or a catchy

song

,

on the other hand

, can be much more appealing and

thus

more effective in conveying information to these

children

.

For example

, the Ghen Covy

song

has been taught at most schools in Vietnam and has become one of

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favorite

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songs.

This

song

has effectively highlighted the importance of hand washing as a means of disease prevention

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and has made it easier for many

children

to remember every step of hand sanitization for its catchy melody and appealing dancing moves.

Furthermore

, the

study

of

arts

is one factor that contributes to

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comprehensive development of young

students

.

While

academic subjects focus on

children

’s cognitive development,

arts

education

help

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children

to develop their social-emotional skills. By singing a

song

or drawing a picture, these

children

are likely to express their feelings and nurture their sense of community.

For example

, thousands of Vietnamese

children

, who were encouraged by their teaching staff, drew pictures of sunflowers to deliver messages of love and support for pediatric cancer patients. In conclusion, the

arts

can sometimes be better at transmitting knowledge than textbooks, and the provision of both academic and

arts

education is necessary for

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all-rounded growth of young

students

. I firmly believe that the

study

of

arts

should never be underestimated in any

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educational institution.