Somepeople are ofthe opinion that ther should be a car free day once every month,there will be only public transport for that day .What are the advantages and disadvantages discuss both
At present,air pollution is becoming a major issue in the world.Many people argue that there should be a car-free day once a month
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Firstly
,with the advancement of technology, more individuals prefer to own their own cars.Linking Words
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the development
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as trends of leasing a car or easy payment instalments attract people to buy private vehicles,which leads to more loads on roads and causes congestion .Linking Words
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,carbon emissions from increased traffic is a hazard.Linking Words
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as a carbon-free day once every month,it promotes public transit and creates equity between different groups of society .
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On the other hand
,communities are used to private convince and they are comfortable travelling by their own cars.If Linking Words
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Secondly
,in case of any emergency, where it is not possible to access local transportation ,Linking Words
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allow to use any private vehicle for a specific day ,it would be detrimental.
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To conclude
, even though making Linking Words
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