The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates information about how the children travelled to and from school in the years 1990 and 2010 with different modes of transport.
From an
overall
perspective, it can by
clearly seen that the highest proportion of Correct your spelling
be
number of
trips in Correct quantifier usage
apply
the
1990 was by walking and in 2010 was by car passenger, Change the article
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while
the lowest proprtion
in 2010 was by cycling and in 1990 by car passenger.
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proportion
According to
what is shown in the chart the number of trips using car passengers grew from 4.2 m
to 11 m
, in the author hand walking dropped by 6.2 m
also
cycling by 4 m
. However
the change over 20 years in different modes of transport was noteworthy, only using bus it wasn't a huge tare between them
to sum up, we could say the total nuber
of treps in 1990 it 34.4 Correct your spelling
number
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, in
2010 the total number Correct word choice
and in
29
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was 29
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