The influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Over the past decade,

biodiversity

has been put in jeopardy as many species have

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extinct

due to

people illegally poaching and the process of urbanization.

However

, governments all across the globe can construct more conservation areas

along with

designating ecological areas that will be protected by laws. When it comes to why the number of

animals

have

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decreased dramatically in the contemporary world,

human’s

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impulsive hunting is doubtlessly one of the key reasons. To be more specific,

animals

, especially

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rare species , have a huge monetary value as they are the most

yearned for

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items at black markets where illegal selling and purchasing occur.

This

is synonymous with the fact that many people who struggle with their

finance

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usually perceive

this unlawful activities

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as a chance for them to earn money so they are willing to hunt

animals

for their valuable skin and horns.

Therefore

, the declining number of fauna and even the extinction of some endangered ones are inevitable. Another principal cause of

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of

biodiversity

is

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urban sprawl which gives rise to

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habitat destruction. To explain

further

, big cities have offered people more opportunities regarding job prospects and other aspects

such

as education and healthcare, all of which facilitate mass immigration to urban areas.

In other words

, more housing amenities are required for the huge population and more factories are erected in order to satisfy the supply and demand.

Thus

, since there

are

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no vacant space left for all those constructions, cutting down trees, which

also

means

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the natural habitat of thousands of species, becomes the only option and

this

clarifies why

animals

have nowhere to survive before gradually dying at the

environment

inapproriate

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inappropriate

for them.

Nevertheless

, establishing more sanctuaries can help

human

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to mitigate the alarming problems in

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biodiversity

.

In particular

, with the protection of

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coupled with

the natural

environment

in nature reserves

such

as

national

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park

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,

animals

not only can grow up normally or even

heathily

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healthily

but they

also

can avoid

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impulsive poaching and those numerous animal traps set up in forests.

As a result

,

this

will provide

further

impetus for

breeding

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and reproduction of

animals

and prevent their population from dropping so significantly. Regarding

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urbanization, authorities should render the ecological zones like forests or hills intact when expanding the cities.

That is

to say,

animals

need their natural habitat to live and when

human

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expand the cities, the

environment

of

animals

is obsoleted.

Accordingly

, if the wildlife is protected by the robust laws concerning the

environment

, any enterprises

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trees for the construction sites should be heavily fined or even incarcerated and for they are afraid of being put into jail, they will find other places but the green space to erect the buildings. In conclusion, loss of

biodiversity

is a pervasive issue in the world on account of

excessively

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hunting and

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urbanization

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from

human’s

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demand.

However

, as long as more guarded zones for

animals

are built and more policies

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urban planning, the

biodiversity

can be maintained and those

animals

can survive in

this

cruel world.